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lol, bravo! :P

Thanks! Yeah, the thing was not letting me position it well... :P

Thank you! :D

Hi Cat! CHRISSY here for some feedback! Ok, well I will be honest-it is interesting... It may just be me, but I feel it would not be easy for readers, ...

This is a great story! A little short though, I think that the idea is so great! I think that you should write more. Ok, and now for some more. ...

Great job my friend! I try to pay attention is SS, never mind write a poem about it! My hat id off to you! *takes off hat* Ok, now with ...

Hey! CHRISSY here for a review! Ok, here we go... I think this is soooo original! I love how you put yourself into it! You added things about your self, ...

That is like the longest review ever! I can only imagine how many points you got!

ok!

No problem!

Hello! CHRISSY here for a review! Ok, first off, I actually find it cool the way the stanzas were arranged! made it more interesting! Ok, well this poem is great. ...

Hi! CHRISSY here with some feedback! I feel that this poem was great! Very full of detail! The funny thing is it reminds me of Katniss from Hunger Games! lol, ...

OMG, This was so great! It was morbid! My kind of story! Know, this feels like something I would write! This was spine chilling! If I had to change one ...

This is great! This is good, and a great solid story, knowing that you only are allowed 650 words! There are a few changes I would make though. This maybe ...

This is pretty good! I think it is depressing, but a good idea. If it were up to me, I would make it longer, and explain more. Who is the ...