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Re: Never a tomorrow.
lol, bravo! :P
Jan 24, 2015 -
Re: The one you love
Thanks! Yeah, the thing was not letting me position it well... :P
Jan 24, 2015 -
Re: The one you love
Thank you! :D
Jan 24, 2015 -
Re: Fowl Meets Potter (Chapter 1)
Hi Cat! CHRISSY here for some feedback! Ok, well I will be honest-it is interesting... It may just be me, but I feel it would not be easy for readers, ...
Jan 23, 2015 -
Re: The Hidden Star
This is a great story! A little short though, I think that the idea is so great! I think that you should write more. Ok, and now for some more. ...
Jan 21, 2015 -
Re: The Native Man's Curse
Great job my friend! I try to pay attention is SS, never mind write a poem about it! My hat id off to you! *takes off hat* Ok, now with ...
Jan 21, 2015 -
Re: ABC's for Writers!
Hey! CHRISSY here for a review! Ok, here we go... I think this is soooo original! I love how you put yourself into it! You added things about your self, ...
Jan 19, 2015 -
Re: ABC's for Writers!
That is like the longest review ever! I can only imagine how many points you got!
Jan 19, 2015 -
Re: 2 minutes
ok!
Jan 18, 2015 -
Re: A Little Girl Grew Up In Here
No problem!
Jan 15, 2015 -
Re: A Little Girl Grew Up In Here
Hello! CHRISSY here for a review! Ok, first off, I actually find it cool the way the stanzas were arranged! made it more interesting! Ok, well this poem is great. ...
Jan 15, 2015 -
Re: Twisted Lives.
Hi! CHRISSY here with some feedback! I feel that this poem was great! Very full of detail! The funny thing is it reminds me of Katniss from Hunger Games! lol, ...
Jan 14, 2015 -
Re: A Sweet Game of Suicide
OMG, This was so great! It was morbid! My kind of story! Know, this feels like something I would write! This was spine chilling! If I had to change one ...
Jan 14, 2015 -
Re: The Disappearance of Elliot Kelley
This is great! This is good, and a great solid story, knowing that you only are allowed 650 words! There are a few changes I would make though. This maybe ...
Jan 14, 2015 -
Re: Angel Tears - Prologue
This is pretty good! I think it is depressing, but a good idea. If it were up to me, I would make it longer, and explain more. Who is the ...
Jan 14, 2015