Riedawriter23

*sigh* Besides the coke, this really makes me want to suceed as a writer! This is really good so far! I love the fame and the drugs and everything! Lol, ...

Awww, poor Tea. It's sad that she doesn't know that Eolen actually loves her. I can only imagine what she felt like just having him watch as she was struck ...

I liked the addition. Jared being beat up kinda made me smile...though my nose hurts now *shudders* I can imagine the blood gushing. Great job Vernon, can't wait for more. ...

This was very good! I didn't catch the cliche that you were talking about. From the beginning I thought that it was going to be a love story between Wyes ...

Wow Luna, this was wonderful! Not one dull sentence and now I'm dying to read more! ~Rieda

This was great! Just like your other poems it's different and out there yet wonderful in every way. :) Keep it up! ~Rieda

hehe, the extra 800 words only made it better! Mostly because Kyle was undressing Jon...you know what I mean. I'm glad Ariel actually let him be with Jon, I thought ...

Wonderful lyrics. I too love the theme, it's very new and different. I can actually imagine singing this...I did matter-o-fact. Probably not in the tune you intended, but it came ...

Woo! *claps hands* Simply brilliant Snoink. XD...I hope you're okay. :) ~Rieda

No, the italics weren't intended at all. I haven't had time to actually edit this I think it was like the first thing I ever posted. Thanks for your reviews ...

The rhyming was great not forced at all, it all flowed well. Your feeling was powerful as well, I got a really nice mental image while reading this and read ...

I love this poem. It means so much and in so little words. It has a "deep" feeling to it, as I already told you. I also love your word ...

Ah, narrators POV this time, interesting it didn't affect the story in any way it was actually nice to finally just look at what was going on :) . And ...

Awww Linds. This was really good. Change your title though so it proves to be more intruiging. lol *cries* Keep at it! ~Rieda

Wow, I love the perspective you put it in, it really works. Fluer's point of view is very interesting, I mean, I always felt that he was seriously going to ...