Riedawriter23

I loved how you ended this piece! I'm also wondering if Jon is gay, possibly even Kyle because he said anyone would sleep with him,(or was that just him being ...

This was the best of all, I agree with Claud! This was more of a calm version of craziness I guess I should say, instead of the major secretive issues ...

I really liked this Claud, I felt that it was really funny(I had gotten the Prince idea at the end of your post LOL) But also it had that strange ...

This was well written. I didn't like the second person point of view so much at first and thougt that you'd lose it, but in the end you pulled it ...

This was good. I like the discription at the beggining, it was very interesting as well as the fight and also the information and clues that you keep giving about ...

This was brilliant! Personally as a writer, I've learned( from professional advice) that spelling errors aren't as important as getting your story, setting, characters, etc. in order which is what ...