Riedawriter23

God I love this! This story is getting better and better with every Ch. I read. I make it a daily routine to keep up with this thing. That's major ...

This was perfect! I swear that I felt my head being slammed into a wall. And I'm wondering is this an anonymous character of is this Sarah? I'm not saying ...

Whoa! This was amazing! Ah, now my head is ringing with what's to happen next. You surprise me everytime I read another post! I love how you had Kyle's ass ...

Ha! I loved this. At first I was thinking that it was some sort of scene being formed and then the way you introduced the card game was great, however, ...

Okay let me start out by saying this sounds really interesting. I like the plot you've created but a few things could be edited. First of all you need to ...

In the beggining I really liked this, but towards the end it did seem like more rhyming from the first couple of lines was needed. It was sort of choppy ...

This was a good start with the rhyming but I really think that if you start it out that way then it should continue. You also need to put your ...

I really enjoyed this. I think the way you showed your characters looks and personalities was well drawn out and your method of fantasy creatures crept into the readers interest ...

It needs something but I can't put my finger on it. I'm thinking maybe a more loose complex. It was kind of straight-line-ish, it would be really nice if you ...

This was really nice but I felt you were attempting much detail without getting as much as the poem needed. If it was added to and really thought through this ...

This was really interesting. I loved it as well, the way it flowed and the words you used were excellent. I too have been told that garter snakes didn't bite, ...

I really liked this poem. I found complete truth in it and I liked how you compared darkness to a woman to a poets lonely companion that was very smart. ...

I understand all of this because Americas government is the worst to me even though I don't often say it. I just don't know where the music is. lol. I ...

I became a little confused. I thought it was just going to be about hands from your title, (which might I add, I rather liked) but I expected more detail ...

This was very enjoyable to read. The whole time I was thinking and never knowing and by the end I wanted to know more. You have a very great description ...