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Re: The Best Thing About you
Yuriiko, you continue to amaze me with your wonderful poetry! How? How can you think of these? They are simply wonderful! I wish I can just cuddle all these poems ...
Jun 24, 2010 -
Re: When The Sky cries... I don't know why
Hey Yuriiko! This may be my first dramatic poetry review, so here it goes. I loved it! I wish there was a button that said 'Love this YWS'. It was ...
Jun 24, 2010 -
Re: Invisible
Hey Cap! I felt that this poem was all over the place-too many repeated words (use a thesaurus, go on microsoft word and search synonyms or go on and have ...
Jun 24, 2010 -
Re: Daydreams
Hey Alainna! I'm RepublicOfCoter (ROC). I quite enjoyed this poem. Very nice choice of words and good use of description. I feel as if this poem could possibly be written ...
Jun 24, 2010 -
Re: I SEEK...
Hey Cap! I didn't mind this poem-good job on the stanzas, very well done (most of it). The descriptions were very well done and the choice of words were well ...
Jun 24, 2010 -
Re: where I belong
Hey screamandshout! I quite enjoyed this poem. I loved the rhyming and the nice calmness it gave off. The choice of words was excellent and it was perfect length-not short, ...
Jun 23, 2010 -
Re: Joie De Vivre ~ The Joy Of Life
Hey King! Finally came around to reading this. I have mixed feelings with this poem. I enjoyed to an extent because it felt like a 'happy' poem, but at times ...
Jun 23, 2010 -
Re: the withering flower
Hey Elinor Brynn! I would have to agree with most of the reviewers that it was an excellent poem but it felt that it was unfinished-perhaps extending it would fix ...
Jun 23, 2010 -
Re: Loves Curse
Hey itsaslowfade! I'm RepublicOfCoter but you may call me ROC. I LOVED this poem! I loved the rhyming which was excellent for your first post I presume? Excellent length, not ...
Jun 23, 2010 -
Re: Glass Wall
Hey Jeanette! I'm RepublicOfCoter but you may call me ROC. I liked this poem. I would have to disagree with ziggiefred-i loved the repetition, I though it made it what ...
Jun 23, 2010 -
Re: Breath me in
Hey AA. I'm RepublicOfCoter but you may call me ROC. I liked the the rhyming of this song but it really lost its feel with all the spelling errors-you really ...
Jun 22, 2010 -
Re: deleted
Hey Yuriiko! I'm RepublicOfCoter but you may call me ROC! This is my first review of someone who I don't know so I'm a bit nervous. Now, I don't usually ...
Jun 22, 2010 -
Re: I Am The Walking Dead
Hey king! I found this poem quite interesting and intriguing. I feel that it can bring forth a lot of conversation because of the way you write it so well ...
Jun 22, 2010 -
Re: Kaboom and there’s your decision.
Hey Cap! May I just say how much I enjoyed this poem. I totally felt what you were saying. It wasn't too long or too short. However, there were a ...
Jun 19, 2010 -
Re: 3rd times the charm
Hey screamanshout! I'm RepublicOfCoter but you may call me ROC. I loved this poem! I thought it was simply amazing. It is nice and short, not dragging like others I ...
Jun 18, 2010
