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Re: Try being me
Hey MysticalBlood! I'm RepublicOfCoter and I'll be your reviewer! Tears come to mind when I read this. If only they came from my eyes rather than my mind. I am ...
Jun 27, 2010 -
Re: Untitled
Hey personalinsanity! I quite enjoyed this poem. I have to agree with kingolions that the idea you bring forward isn't one a lot people would like but I do. It ...
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Re: Leaving
Hey AutumnSun! I enjoyed the idea of the poem but not the poem itself. I felt that it was lacking structure. The first stanza was a good length while the ...
Jun 27, 2010 -
Re: The lovers
Hi. After I read the first stanza I knew exactly what I was going to get-something slightly annoying. I didn't like the rhyming one bit; to me, it ruined the ...
Jun 27, 2010 -
Re: Smile?
Hi colie18! I really enjoyed this poem! I have to totally agree with the message you are saying in this poem-I have to say that I'm guilty of doing that ...
Jun 27, 2010 -
Re: In the memory of Deryn jones
Hi spy0h! I'm RepublicOfCoter but you can call me ROC. I'll be your reviewer today and HAPPY REVIEWING DAY! I'm sorry to say, but I really didn't no which way ...
Jun 27, 2010 -
Re: Who I am
Hey nicchaos! I really enjoyed this poem! The length was well done!I loved how you introduced a good aspect of the person and then you said a contradiction. They really ...
Jun 27, 2010 -
Re: I Am The Face In The Crowd
Hey kingolions! I really enjoyed this poem. May I just say, great work! It was nice and short and perfect length. Now, I don't usually like poems with stanzas with ...
Jun 27, 2010 -
Re: Never Left
Hey kitrosemon13! I liked this poem to a certain point. The wording was well with great descriptive words. Now to the nip picks: I don't like the length of each ...
Jun 27, 2010 -
Re: Hope
Hey spike71294! I didn't mind this poem but I felt that it was lacking something. I can't quite put my finger on it so sorry that I couldn't be of ...
Jun 27, 2010 -
Re: Please Mommy
Hey screamandshout! Amazing! Simply amazing! I didn't expect what happened in the poem. It was sad but that's why it was so good. The simplicity about it made it wonderful ...
Jun 26, 2010 -
Re: 1 wish
Hey screamandshout! I liked this poem. For someone who wrote when they were 11 is pretty impressive :smt002 . The wording was done well and the choice of words was ...
Jun 26, 2010 -
Re: Depressing Rain!!!
Hey Cap! I'm sorry but I'm lost for words. I really don't know what to say? You've made some really good poems in the past and then you write this? ...
Jun 26, 2010 -
Re: The Haunting Voice
Hey kingolions! I really enjoyed this poem. I like how you introduce the haunting voice at the start and the way you tell us about it. Beautifully written with, what ...
Jun 25, 2010 -
Re: deleted
Hey Yuriiko! You still continue to blow me away! What an amazing piece! Everything was in perfect balance! You seem to be a dictionary and a thesaurus in one. It ...
Jun 24, 2010
