RennisanceBlade

Thank you for the feedback! I have attempted to fix some of the problems that you pointed out, so I hope that it is easier to read now! And thanks ...

Thank you! I appreciate it!

Eru Illuvitar, you Son of a Balrog!! You are really good with words. I mean really, really good! I wish I was half as good at this as you... But, ...

Okay! Thanks so much! I will keep that in mind and see what I can do to fix those few literary mistakes. Thanks again!

Thanks! I actually wrote this during a period of intense emotional loss and despair, but I've never been through a break-up myself or in an abusive relationship. I just wrote ...

Thanks so much! And of course I will! Your reviews and feedback is always welcome, so I will totally tag you!

You're welcome!

Wow! This is a really good poem. The rhythm is pretty good, giving it an easy to follow pattern. You also don't repeat too many words, making it just the ...

This is truly beautiful! I like how she has human emotion, but isn't cold or overly friendly. She has her own problems, yet shoves them under to keep her parents ...

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This is truly beautiful! I like how she has human emotion, but isn't cold or overly friendly. She has her own problems, yet shoves them under to keep her parents ...

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This is truly beautiful! I like how she has human emotion, but isn't cold or overly friendly. She has her own problems, yet shoves them under to keep her parents ...

Thank you! And, yes, this is supposed to be a prologue. I will keep that in mind!