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thanks. Yes, I did read it over and when I have the time I plan to edit it.

Thanks Formslipper, I was aiming more for what people thought of the content but that's okay.

I'm trying to go for something to be in 'Featured Works' but I think that it needs more 'likes'....

Well then, thanks! :)

Woah... This was really, very good. I hadn't expected this when I clicked on it and am glad I was wrong. The repetition of the second paragraph/stanza was great and ...

you know, minus the fact he killed himself. I figured he would've gunned down the other gaurds and the business man first.

awwwwww. :) thanks Death. Renny Renners?

Wow, All I can say is wow. There were only small mistakes, like words meant to be plurals that weren't, but wow. Is there any more of this theme? A ...

Oh my god. This is one of those rare and amazingly dark, if I may say, ballads that I wish I could either hear more of this poem and or ...

This is pretty cool, I liked the unusual setup and prose of writing. It really rolls off the tongue when you say it aloud. :)

Wow... This was sad but was sweet in the same way... I liked the way it flowed, very profesional sounding. A deep, moving, darkly fascinating poem that drew me into ...

Oh... My... God. This is quite possibly the most epic poem I've ever read on here! It's dark, emotional, and addictive unto itself. I love this so much! Please, for ...

Wow.. This was deep and highly moving. I can imagine this being something that could happen and probably has somewhere, I love it. Keep writing!

Thanks for all the advice! :) I'd missed half of it and expect nothing more than a little general, despite never seeing any zombie movies. But that's okay. And I ...

This is absolutely hilarious! OH MY GOD!!!! XD