Renn

To be honest, I really really liked this. From the beginning (the title) I expected something cliche and underwhelming. Thankfully and truthfully, your piece went beyond my expectations. This showed ...

I have no idea how to convey this other than "I ABSOLUTELY LOVE THIS!" It made me laugh oh so very hard, and I approved of the crossed-out bits because ...

This was really good! It was lyrical and poetic without being cliche or unoriginal. We searched and searched for wings, for feathered appendages to lift us away, but we were ...

This was definitely an interesting piece. I think it changed moods in the middle, going from a sort of melencholy (forgive my spelling) to a sort of anger/bitterness. It takes ...

I found this witty and funny and I couldn't help but smile as you turned this into a poem a lot of us (YWSers) can relate to. :) The old ...

This was a phenominal piece of work and I think this 'hits home' with a lot of people. People who have never gone through this seem to feel an dhurt ...

I thought this was captivating and really quite good, and I think the images that they bring are creepy (in a good way, that is) and very clear. The prose ...

I thought this was actually pretty good, and the lyrics made sense while using words that (in my humble opinion) may have been used just to sound pretty. But that's ...

This was really dark, and I liked it. The mood was set from the very first sentence and continued throughout the entire passage. I think that it's remarkable that you ...

This was good, I mean really good. I could almost hear music to it, like this could be a song. To be honest I couldn't find anything wrong with it ...

Oh my god. This was unconventional but still so very very very amazing. Not only does this radiate with every word you've written, but you make it so able to ...

This was really pretty, I must admit. The prose was solid, the stanzas were of perfect length and beat, and it was easily understandable. The poem gave away what you ...

Well then.. Wow. As far as that prompt goes, the prompt of 'a maid at a desk forgetting names,' I can say you excelled at it. I really did like ...

Wow... And must I say again... Wow. This was amazing, and I'm honored to think you asked for advice. Well I must also say that this has gone above and ...

I really like this, it has a steady rhythm and is morbid. I expect that from you, and you lived up to that! :) You really should create an ACTUAL ...