Renn

Oh my god. This was lovely, and I'm sorry if I can't really sum it up and demean it with silly words like 'lovely.' But truly, I browse the zero ...

Oh golly. Wow. I'm depressed... Which is good. That's kind of what you're going for. So... kudos, I think. As someone who recently had a friend take up smoking (and ...

I feel like I should be a lot more affected by this than I am. It's a good (if not well-worn) topic, but with the unique twist that they really ...

Wow... I agree with the previous comments. This is difficult to read, very, and seems to skip around a lot- at first I thought it was in Suzy's perspective, and ...

Huh... I rather enjoy the concept, in a sick, twisted sort of way. I think the formatting and editing could use some work, but hey- there was never a draft ...

I do like this, as it shows how little "information" teenagers can use to pass judgement on someone else, and how everyone just hops on the bandwagon because it's the ...

I couldn't even... Wow. This was intense, for lack of a better word. I'm moved. I loved the imagery. Sometimes it seemed a bit... I can't even- wistful? I'm stunned ...

I never cease to be surprised by how amazing everything you write is, I must say though- this is especially good. I really love it (if saying that to this ...

Okay- here I go. First off, you've listed this as 'Novel/Chapter' which this is most certainly not. My reasoning for this is simple- novels and chapters have explainations, clear actions, ...

I liked this! I really did! There were a few ways about how it was formatted and such that irked me, just a bit, but other than that.... Nope! Nothing ...

Hello! This is Renn, and I'd like to give you my thoughts on your poem! Don't worry, it's mostly (kidding) good news. I very much like this. It's abstract and ...

I liked this, but it seemed a little... Rough? It feels that half of it was written rather quickly, and coming from someone who crams out poetry and it shows- ...

This was... interesting. And really good. It felt almost like a persuasive essay, but not forced, very natural. This is something people always seem to keep 'hush-hush' and say that ...

OhMaiJitterbugPalooza. This was really quite awesome. Although, I must say, the ending was a total rip off of another death-related chapter of mine. *cough cough* But yes, the other people ...

I liked this, and it sounded like how you talked- when you get in your philosophical moods. So, to start out with, I think this is good- with a lot ...