Renard

Ah ha! You have been busy. And this is certainly a very LONG chapter. Firstly: Love the ending: “I promise, father, I will not let you down.” always a good ...

Hello. Wow. You have no idea how long it took me to read this! XD I was expecting a short story or a poem or something. And this was an ...

Hello. At first, I had my doubts as to how you were going to write about this. After reading it however, I completely understand XD And you did a good ...

Hello. I haven't read any of the other chapters and this seems like a bit of an odd place to start! XD Ha ha. Well... I really like the way ...

Hello! I haven't read the rest of your story, but I am going to review this one on its literary merit alone so. What Went Well 1. The length actually, ...

Hello! You wrote a very charming opening line, because it was so confessional. Well for the character anyway. An interesting hook. This work is rather short and it discusses the ...

Hello. This is a very romantic metaphor. Awww. You've used dialogue (sorta) and a rhetorical question all in one go here. I love it. So, an evaluation of this poem: ...

So this is a more interesting work. XD I will do the review in the parts of the poem. So: Part 1: Where is that fragrance, that used to haunt ...

Hello. So this is a very simple poem with a very simple confession: I didn't like it. I prefer chaos. By this point, I notice that it really does get ...

Hello! Me again! XD There's someone coming through the back door I can sense their very presence With all of the forces of nature pressed Up against my will This ...

Hello again. Back to the reviewing. Hmmmm. I feel that this work is a bit like a game: Here's perfection Here's my blessing Glad you agree And you're nodding People ...

This is a song I wrote when I was bored Nothing else to say Just let me touch the door Eating out suggestion With very little care Give me your ...

Hello. I wans't sure what to make of this work at the first, you know, whwther to take it literally or metaphorically. There can be sometimes be a lot of ...

I'm glad you wrote this work. I'm glad you gave it the title you did, because it explains the basis of your writing! XD And you're acknowledging it. Hee hee. ...

Hmm. This is a deliberately controversial work. You can tell that by the fact it doesn't have a title. At first, I thought it was going to be another of ...