RenGrey

Thank you. I certainly will, I was already apprehensive posting this o here as scripts are not my medium and the format it from my my typical skillet. Then I ...

Thank you very much for your constructive criticism. As playwriting and script are not my strong points. Melodrama was intentional but thank you

I love the flow of this, and the rhyming is very well paired. Despite the dark in nature I loved it. Because to be honest without dark we would know ...

Thank you :)

Thank you, I will work on that in the future :)

Really? Thank you, I'm glad I was able to create something refreshing and unique thank you for your comment :)

Thank you :) I'm glad you loved it

Thank you :) by the way I love your screen name, quite brilliant

Thank you very much, I will try to come up with a continuation if I can as soon as possible par your request. Though I dnt know how cohesive it ...

Thank you, I'm glad I wasn't the only one who found it humorous. I didn't want to be the person who laughs at their own jokes :) please don't die.....imafraid. ...

Haha, really? Thank you very much! I appreciate your comment immensely.

Lol I just noticed you said "hoe" instead of "hope" Just about made my evening

Let me tell you, this is yet again another well done piece written by you. I was intrigued as to what was going on and despite this work being out ...

Thanks you Al :)

Thank you for your kind words. I did not find them harsh at all. More encouraging and constructive criticism would be the proper words :) I'm glad my poem enhanced ...