RenGrey

Very interesting I liked it's a lot. I didn't see very many grammatical errors and the main character was charming. My only problem I would have like more descriptions so ...

I like this. It could be a poem that doesn't rhyme, but it doesnt have the form. But rather philosophical and I enjoyed this a lot. It's thoughtful too. I'd ...

Very interesting. I am slightly confused as to what is going on and I found there were a tad of extraneous details and information. The flow though was somewhat strange ...

There are a few grammatical errors here and there but I am it going to hit and pick over them because I want to get to the overall thing I ...

Besides tid bits about grammar, I would have to say this is a very well done piece. The flow was smooth and the story was easy to follow and very ...

This was beautifully done. It was heartfelt and touching yet real at the same time with a tad of innocence. I agree with what SakuraFallsSweetly had to say in addition. ...

Loved this. I liked how you did it begin at the very beginning of Anna's story leaving a little to the imagination to figure out how the hell she may ...

First I would like to congratulate you on your unique and brilliant title :) I, too have been at loss for titles so I speak the first thing that comes ...

(Continuation) I liked how this was not the "typical" poem where every line or every other line rhymes. I like how it is a narratives of sorts where it tells ...

A few grammatical errors nuntheless well done. Rather catchy and the lines seemed to have meaning and ring true.

I stumbled upon this and what can I say. I'm rather at a loss for words! But for all of the right reasons. The descriptions were so detailed I felt ...

First of all kudos to another amazing work created by you. Thoroughly thought out and very easy to follow. Just sticky and alluring enough to draw readers in and have ...

I love your humor and witt :) keep at it, this made me laugh really hard. Loves the color change in the text by the way as it progressed. Perfect ...

Hullo there. To be honest I am not at all a fan of fan fiction. But yours I really loved. I have yet to see the film but your interpretation ...

I really liked this. I found it brilliantly witty and humorous I found myself chuckling aloud. I love your interpretation of the contest entry what would the word be that ...