Remington38

This was hilarious And I agree if you could either extend it or make more like it, it would make an amazing children's story or picture book. I envy writers ...

I agree with Kathryn that this story has lots of potential and little description. You also need to pay maybe a little more attention to your quotations putting those around ...

Hello Remington38 for a late night review. I honestly hate myself now for reading this before I go to sleep because the light on the smoke alarm is green and ...

Hello this is Remington38, I love horror stories/movies and found myself laughing. It is so true and really connects to all the people who like to yell at their screens/books ...

Hello Remington38 here I really enjoyed reading this it is short, but filled to the brim with emotions. This story could be classified easily as poetry and the descriptions are ...

Hello Remington38 for a review, I really liked this story and the nice slow build up. It was suspenseful and I really liked her thought process being put in. I ...

Okay Hi Remington38 here for a review. I absolutely love reading and writing about schizophrenia whereas its sad in real life it makes amazing stories. If this were a book ...

Hello Remington38 here for a review, The story drew me in straight off the bat. Human experimentation has many different paths down it and what makes me like it is ...

I love the story. Sorry if this review is awkward it's my first. That is one of the things I love about writing horror is that murder is open for ...