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Re: If I Killed Myself Tonight
The first line really grabs the reader's attention right away and I was really intrigued. I personally know what it's like to go through this and I can see these ...
Jun 6, 2018 -
Re: My Sister
By the first verse I already knew that you are a very talented writer. You immediately give the reader something to visualize in their mind and they metaphor you use ...
May 22, 2018 -
Re: Seen From the Park Bench
First of all, I think it was really well written. It is very light and playful, and you can certainly see your writing style in this. When I think of ...
May 22, 2018 -
Re: this has happened to me,
Hello! I really enjoyed this poem. It was very simple and short yet conveyed the thing you wanted to get across. Some of the spacing distracted me, such as the ...
May 18, 2018
