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  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: If I Killed Myself Tonight

    The first line really grabs the reader's attention right away and I was really intrigued. I personally know what it's like to go through this and I can see these ...

    Jun 6, 2018
  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: My Sister

    By the first verse I already knew that you are a very talented writer. You immediately give the reader something to visualize in their mind and they metaphor you use ...

    May 22, 2018
  • Poetry » Lyrical, Humor Re: Seen From the Park Bench

    First of all, I think it was really well written. It is very light and playful, and you can certainly see your writing style in this. When I think of ...

    May 22, 2018
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: this has happened to me,

    Hello! I really enjoyed this poem. It was very simple and short yet conveyed the thing you wanted to get across. Some of the spacing distracted me, such as the ...

    May 18, 2018


Should we not walk? On our feet? The ones I now have again? I do like my feet. They are befittingly perambulatory.
— Pattern (Rhythm of War by Brandon Sanderson)