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I also admire how often you update.

Sorry I have not been reviewing and commenting. I have been busy. Anyways really cute chapter. I am actually a little jealous. I am writing a date scene but can't ...

I can see that. Personal experience is the best source for writing.

Sorry I tripled commented.

I really like this! I like the metephor of the spider web with the character and him getting stuck because of shyness and helpless and him from oblivion. Also I ...

I really like this! I like the metephor of the spider web with the character and him getting stuck because of shyness and helpless and him from oblivion. Also I ...

I really like this! I like the metephor of the spider web with the character and him getting stuck because of shyness and helpless and him from oblivion. Also I ...

Oh I see

Hey strangelove it's red. I like the poem but I don't fully understand the message. I can guess it maybe about underage driving because it mentions stealing wheel.

I am sort of embarassed that I spelled murder wrong. The reason for the weird words is because I was trying to put it into chunks. I need to be ...

Great second chapter!! First off, I do like the formatting of the chatting between the characters. It's clear and easy to read who is chatting and when Lara is thinking. ...

Great second chapter!! First off, I do like the formatting of the chatting between the characters. It's clear and easy to read who is chatting and when Lara is thinking. ...

This was a very sad. I liked you narration and writing. I felt like you explained enought to not make it overwhelming and irritating. I really felt bad for the ...

Yeah I have issues with comas I still don't fully understand how to use them.

I think the when writing larger vocabulary for younger audience it is important for you to context clues. It might be a little too strong because there were a few ...