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Hey, the comment resubited when i accidenly clicked back space.

Thanks for answering. It helped.

Thanks for the comment. Although, how did you find this work?

Big thanks to you. The suggestions and praise really made my day!

I wasn't expecting jealously behind the reason you hate dogs. This was a pretty homorus piece.

Actually when I switch to first person it was suppose to be in italics. When I thought I put into italics when I copied and pasted. Grr. Anyways thanks for ...

Also I have in my head thier young teenagers or Tweens.

Thanks so much for the feedback. I have the third chapter pretty much all ready to go. I am so glad you liked it

I accidently reposted when I pushed the back button.

This is a great poem. There is an awesome rhytham to it and the wording is nicely put together. I like how it is clear and relatable too. In my ...

Very good peom. It has a very nice beat and rhyming sceme.

This was a pretty interesting peom. The form, how you seperated your lines, and the way you written it was different. I also like how you compared and represented the ...

Very nicely written. I liked the descriptions and the vocabualry. I wonder what will happen in the next chapter. It was vague enough to keep us wondering and detailed enough ...

Sorry, I didn't read the fallowing comments. I usualy avoid them so they won't influence my opinion on stories. I can't wait for you to continue!!

I liked this poem. I feel like it's relatable and I felt like it had a good beat to it. Also I the rhyning was a good touch. There is ...