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Hey it's Redbox for another review. First of all last reviewer did have a point that this may be in the wrong part of the website due to it seeming ...

It's a bummer this has been in the green room for so long. Your writing is very good. One of the first things I noticed is the amazing descriptions. How ...

Holy cow this was funny! It's very true shoes and socks are equal. *giggles*. I definatley see this as a charming, adorable, and good children's book. With the rhyming and ...

This was such a interesting and unique piece! I loved reading all the different responses and it was great how you pulled off the different writing styles. The little kid's ...

I really liked this story too. The dialog was nicely realistic. I could easily tell the personality of the characters and I like girl. (Didn't catch her name) She seems ...

That was such a sweet and lovely poem. What stuck out to me the most was how you placed all the words in the poem to make it clear, flowiing, ...

The first paragraph was a really good hook. It was vague and had many possibilites of what could've had happpened. Although I was confused on some parts of the story. ...

Happy 2015! I found this to be a wonderful work. The emotions in this story felt touching and authentic while relationship between Alex and Victoria was romantic and realistic. Although ...

Another great chapter from another great writer. To be honest I have been having trouble fallowing this story. It's been a while since I read and I need to catch ...

Ohhh love triangle! I am liking it so far. Autumn's insight is again very relatable and realistic. So far the writing is good and I like the amount of description. ...

I love it so far! i would love it even more if my reading brain was more fresh. Anyways, Autumn's narrative is very good and I think her situation is ...

Very interesting poem. Unlike the previous poems I read so far I did feel any beat and rythem nor do I see any rhyming but I does have good content. ...

This was a good story. I don't think there is any word to describe it though. Sad, sweet, charming, interesting aren't words I though when reading this. The writing was ...

I loved the concept for this story. It's pretty interesting to see how she should we steal her friend's boyfriend and if she would succeed or not. Also what I ...

Another very well written chapter. I feel like you did a good job of fleshing out the characters and the dialog from them was realistic and interesting. I don't mind ...