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Re: Seven Swords Chapter 1 - Part 2
I would much rather Levi have died because you made Levi all ready seem like a fully mature and developed person in the first chapter. So I feel like Leo ...
Jul 31, 2015 -
Re: Faith - Chapter One
Just because he is poor doesn't mean he has the vocabulary of j.k Rowling
Jul 20, 2015 -
Re: Faith - Chapter One
You are an excellent writer but the ideas are not so good. If you are thinking as a teen your not going to be thing like that. Those are things ...
Jul 19, 2015 -
Re: Normal or Unique?: Chapter 1
Thanks
Jul 18, 2015 -
Re: A World That Cares-Ch 1: The Psychopathy Test
I like what this story is based on but you should put it under short story because it is very rushed. Try and add a back story describing how life ...
Jul 17, 2015 -
Re: Normal or Unique?: Chapter 1
Yeah I wrote this pretty quick (hour) and if this story is predictable then tell me how its going to go. Anyways thanks
Jul 17, 2015 -
Re: Normal or Unique?: Chapter 1
Thanks
Jul 17, 2015 -
Re: Removed
some ig I made the mistake but I don't not see the fantasy in the first chapter to me it just seems like a romance novel. Try and add more ...
Jul 16, 2015 -
Re: Absolute - Chapter 1
Try an add something to keep the reader going I cant help you with this because I don't know where this book is going!
Jul 16, 2015 -
Re: Introduction: A Fallen Place
Trust me I will and can you go look at my blog post im a bit stuck.
Jul 15, 2015