RedHoodWriter

I think it kinda does later on, but in the beginning it isn't really clear. Maybe use some flashbacks in order to give more detail about his past? Describing more ...

Thank you for your help! :) I really do apreciate it. I know I have never been great with grammar, so any help you give me is amazing. As for ...

Thank you so much! Honestly I am always struggling with grammar so I am not surprised that I am struggling with it. Thank you though Because the more you guys ...

Thank you for making me smile honestly blushing at my computer now

yeah originally I put fight or flight on another document I was working on .... I don't know what happened I guess that when I was transfering it something got ...

I am in love with this. This is literally how it was for me when my sister went off to college.

Okay once again sorry if the review didn't help... The only thing I would say is to just make sure that you don't confuse the reader too much. That is ...

Thank you so much for reviewing my poem. I was curious to see how well this poem would do, considering that I don't write poetry that much and well I ...

Thank you for your help! I was curious to see how well this poem would do because I actually wrote this a few years ago.