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Atmosphere and emotions (or should I say emotionlessness) were the things that drew me into the story. This allowed me to (I have to admit) get a bit tense at ...

Cool story. I really enjoyed how it was from the robot's perspective and, I have to say, it certainly stirred my emotions. There were, however, a few things I believe ...

I really did enjoy the story, but there were a few things that caught me about the way you incorporated everything. Perhaps it's just me, but I often don't like ...

Interesting... Interesting indeed. I find it difficult to read. A bit choppy and full of inappropriately placed "and"s. First, it was quite confusing for various reasons. Second, there seemed, at ...

Have to say, it's pretty depressing and seems pretty filled with hate. However, it did get across a wealth of emotion. It was kind of confusing at first, but I ...

Great description of temptation, and how very true indeed. You did a good job of making the beginning third-person and toward the end winding up the we, making it more ...

Okay, a couple of things I did notice, some were grammatically (which messed up the flow of my reading and concentration a few times. (1) I'm not sure what was ...