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Re: self image [whats that thing in the mirror]
This is beautiful and terrifying. The idea of looking into the mirror and seeing a monster staring back - and the monster being your own self-image? Very real, and terrifying, ...
Feb 3, 2024 -
Re: You Spoke My Langauge
This is absolutely beautiful! Firstly, I love the way it flows. The different stanza's develop the speaker's feelings very naturally and fluently, it makes the story progress naturally. Secondly, I ...
Feb 1, 2024 -
Re: The Tears On My Path
A very relatable and heart-aching poem - well done! I especially like your fourth stanza and how you use the bone imagery to hammer down your message and feelings in ...
Feb 1, 2024 -
Re: Witness It All and Never Forget
Hello! Amazing poem firstly! I love the use of words like 'gnaws', 'splattering', and 'ripping' - it really creates some vivid imagery and creates a beautiful contrast between the two ...
Feb 1, 2024