Razcoon

Thanks guys! Delmarria, first off, welcome to the site! Second, I found the two typos, so thank you again. I hate typos with a burning passion. xD I typed this ...

That's better, then, and I'm glad you explained yourself. I don't find insults funny at all unless they're over the top, sarcastic, or otherwise obviously meant in some other way. ...

I looked at the site, and I'd just like to point out...Why are you offended by a man who calls himself Dick Masterson? xDD He's a joke!

Okay, Snoink. Constructive criticism. Stel, this would be funnier if you didn't use words like "all" and "every", making a mass generalization, and thus only reaching a small audience and ...

@stelagineva I didn't tell you to take it down, but basically implied it should never have been put up in the first place. A different guy friend on the site ...

Sorry you guys. I really suck at poetry, but I thought I'd give it a shot :( We review harshly to help you improve so that in the future your ...

Whoo, I made the list! :D

Yaaay, thank you guys! I really want to say I shouldn't get the credit, but considering it came from a dream...who to give credit to? o.e

By the way, I forgot to mention this in my first post, but at first I thought he was a ghost sent to her or something and confused about everything. ...

Hi! Great poem. It reminds me of Bloody Mary, is that what you were going for? Anyway this tells a great story and it was, as ziggiefred said, refreshing to ...

But I'd rather not face life than not face dead I don't understand what that's supposed to mean. I think something like I'd rather not face life nor death Just ...

I will review this later. :)

Wow, this is a dark poem. It's really good, as far as I can tell. It has a lot of meaning. Sorry if this isn't a good review, I'm not ...

Wow, this is really good! I'm going to read the last three so I have a bit of background. Just so you're aware, your avatar scares me. A lot.

Next chapter may - will - be delayed. Sorry.