Razcoon

I really liked this peace, namely because I can really relate to the main character. My mother is my polar opposite too. Sadly, a simple "I'm sorry" doesn't help anything. ...

You have the nerve to say you're smarter than the lot of us? There are several handfuls of typos I could point out right now. Add to that the fact ...

I'll go ahead and assume that this is unfinished. ^^ My first kiss was a goodbye kiss, my my my first word was goodbye, you can%u2019t keep me to yourself, ...

Here to review! ^^ I like your imagery and the message you convey, though at first it seems as though you aren't conveying a message at all. Personally, I'm not ...

I'm going to be completely honest here. It bored me at first, but it managed to catch my interest a little later on. I read this because it was recommended ...

We already knew Lars was a scumbag. Chapter fourteen told us that well enough. Meeting him, though, is something different altogether. Thank God he is where he is! He's insane! ...

Oh dear God. These things about Lars are shocking. He used to rape his own wife? That's horrible! Solea worshiped the guy! This makes me wonder about Solea's personality. You ...

I see you fixed your initial dialogue issue. Alzan seems to be sure that Solea is a conqueror, and, in all truth, I'm beginning to waver a bit. Lormones can't ...

“Sorry, Iluve,” Alzan said cheerfully. Lomones felt Alzan grab his shoulder and drag him up to his feet. “You should go to sleep, my slave. We’re be leaving now. ” ...

Okay, I'm going to start my review off by making this easier on the eyes. ^^ I'm sorry, but your grammar and spelling is atrocious. in On a bright , ...

Hey Jash! I've been a bit busy lately, but I promise you, I'll get to it. I'm locking my WRFF thread for the time being, but I'll have this done ...

If I wer (were) a car , (punctuation will be fixed in blue) I'd be the fuel Moving the engine . if i (capitalization matters - "If I") were a ...

Whoa. The layout was different, and at first I thought I was reading something else. Then came the mention of the Conquerors and Uclepidies and Diamea...speaking of which, Diamea's dead?! ...

Oooh. Poor Iluve. D: As far as nitpicks go... I don’t care. She was being mean and she shouldn’t have said those things. If she things thinks that I am ...

Hoas is the little girl. That was unexpected. Like Fledge said, it's hard to believe specific dialogue would be remembered from Hoas's dream, as 1. Hoas probably wouldn't remember word ...