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  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: The Hope of Imagination

    It was beautiful. I loved it. It captured such a strong emotion. I don't exactly understand why some of the words are capitalized, but I'm sure there's a reason. I ...

    Feb 10, 2007
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: Mystification

    Ummmmmmmmmm...I believe about half of the 2007 collegiate dictionary is stuffed into that piece of work. Just kidding, just kidding. No, I am not the Simon Cowell of poetry critique. ...

    Feb 10, 2007
  • Poetry » Narrative, General Re: ...Between...

    That was inspiring, really it was. It took me to the empty theatre, sitting in the very first row, just staring at the desolate silence that comes from a stage ...

    May 6, 2005
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: The City of Time

    I am completely in love with this poem. It's one of the most exceptional pieces of work I have layed eyes on. No criticisms, I'm sorry. Honestly, I'm gaping at ...

    Mar 2, 2005
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Warning: Sappy, may cause loss of apetite or vomitting

    This was great! It expresses true feeling and it flowed nicely too. "if we would have spent our days lying on our backs in grassy fields making pictures in the ...

    Mar 2, 2005
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Reality

    It could turn out to be wonderful, but it needs more length. So short a poem can't have much depth or passion, which is what people look for when they're ...

    Feb 26, 2005
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Dying- I revised it: tell me if its worse......or better.

    Ahem...That sent chills down my spine. Ok...critisism, critisism. I like it except for one little line. "At the end of its twirling whirl." You used "the end" on the last ...

    Feb 26, 2005


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