RavenBlack

Thanks for the review. I think I confused myself with Ivy because this is based on my experience and I'm nothing like Ivy. But the scene when me and 'Francis' ...

Thanks so much. i always have an issue with telling and not showing, haven't been able to fix that yet. But thanks again :D

Thanks so much for the review :-D

Thanks for the review Lizz. I've written Ivy's reaction to having her soul taken was addressed in chapter 1 I believe but I understand that she seems calm, probably should ...

It's basically the longer version of this. It starts after Damon convinces her to get revenge and so on

Thanks for the review! Yeah this was for coursework but I enjoyed writing it so much that I wanted to make it into a novel. Things are more explained in ...

Thanks so much. I'm glad you like it after just reading a small section :-) For the part when you said that it feels a bit awkward, do you mean ...

Thanks so much! I kinda of wanted to show Damon's lighter and kinder side because he's always sarcastic. But thanks for the help! :-D

Thanks for the clear up. Yeah it's better to write now when its all in your head :-)

Thank you, means a lot :-D

That's exactly what I was trying to imply! Are you a mind-reader?! xD

Thanks so much! I'm glad you like Damon he's my favourite character and fun to write. Thanks also for the tips in dialogue tags, didn't know much about them but ...

I'm so happy you got the Adam and Eve reference, I thought no one would notice! Thanks again :-D

thanks for the review :-)

Thanks for the comments! No mine isn't good, i though it was rather bad actually. But we'll both improve through our trails and failures. :-)