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Bravo, Welcome to Young Writers Society, I would just liek to give you a few pointers, to post a work of your own you have to review two other pieces ...

Hello, Thanks so much for the request of a review :). Im so sorry it took so long I just started school back up, and Im being loaded down with ...

The always needing to be near him. This sentence is quite confusing. Maybe try it this way: The need to always be with him; wasn't it evident that I needed ...

Hello Friend, Ok so i have never really reviewed lyrics before but I do know that there were some spelling mistakes that i think someone before me pointed out :) ...

Hello Friend, Thanks for requesting a review all though it might not be as helpful as you would like because I really liked this and saw little or no room ...

An unknown person wearing a mining suit was standing right in front of the bushes. I think there should be more description concerning this man. What does he look like? ...

Hello KailaMarie, Sorry Im late for your review, but here I am and I hope that its a helpful one :). “We can make it work. Don’t do this. Please.” ...

Hello friend :), Im so happy to welcome you to YWS, and to be the first to review your work. but before i get started I have to remind you/ ...

Hello :) im so glad to your reviewer for today. first off this is really good. i love the imagery with the wall. And your rymthe sceme was very creative. ...

Hello :) Im so happy to welcome you to YWS! I hope you've checked it all out. im also very excited to see you write some more. :) Just a ...

I liked it, there was lots of descrption. I didn't see many flaws, but I do think this piece was rather short. And the suspension that suppose to be there ...

I cant believe this! I get the backspace button and it went to the page before instead of erasing the last line. It has deleted my entire review. I am ...

Hello, Boy am I glad to be your reviewer for today. :). Before you requested a review I had read these many times, over and over. I loved this piece, ...

Hello, have a happy welcome to YWS! I'm glad to be your reviewer for today. I just wanted to let you know that there is only one rule here at ...

Hello, Welcome to YWS! Let me remind you that we do have one rule here. Before you post a work of your own we ask that you review two other ...