Haikus can be odd
Sometimes they just don't make sense
Refrigerator
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Now some Limericks:
When life gives you lemons, make lemonade,
Your effort and work will be repaid
If not with cash money
Nor with sweet honey
Maybe a “lemon for Oreo” trade
I’ve been writing a book, the greatest in town
It’s good for a smile, a laugh, and a frown
It was typed on my “Dell”
And, of course, well,
I forgot to save and my computer shut down
I saw a sign that said “Chef for Hire”
So I applied, and, if you inquire,
I said I could fry
They gave me a try
And I set the whole place on fire
I seem smelly, or so I was told,
Another shower could probably hold
So the water was on
And flush went “the John”
Then the water went from hot to cold
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Well hello there fellow new-be, (it's Ryley). I liked these poems. They were cute, I even chuckled a little. When did you write these? I liked how you displayed different types of poetry. Although you can tell that they are amateur (not that I should be talking/typing) they resemble you.
I was just wondering when in the day you write these. I know french class is boring but a lot of inspiration there.
My favorite line is
only because you took a classic phrase in life and added a twist. I was expecting a life sucks do something about it poem, but of course that's not what you did.
You use a lot of quotations I noticed, but that wasn't a huge deal because it was in a different poem each time.
Well I hope this is 150 words.....
hope to see more of your works
-Ry
Oh, it's a shame the first wasn't yours, that was my favourite ha ha! Well I think you need a little bit of work on rhyme and rhythm, for example:
These rhymes are very simplistic, you may want to consider using some more sophisticated language, either by reading more, using a dictionary or thesaurus, or listening to some other great lyricists (like Eminem lol!)
There is a slight rhythm problem here due to a few too many commas:
Overall, there's some good jokes, you just need to work on using better "filler" lines in between your initial set-up line and your final punch-line. Keep it up
Hello! I’m XYZinnia!
So, when you post here on YWS, it’s really supposed to be your own work. I know for a fact that I’ve seen that Haiku before.
Here it is, actually. http://www.typetees.com/product/623/Haikus_are_easy_but_sometimes_they_don_t
So are the others your original poems? Or are they from the internet, too? Just tell me, and I’ll be happy to review them!
See ya around!
-Y
Hello,
If you have any problems or questions please pm me, I would be happy to direct to a piece that needs reviewing 
Welcome to YWS! Let me remind you that we do have one rule here. Before you post a work of your own we ask that you review two other pieces of work. This is to ensure that everybodys work gets reviewed and critqued!
I won't give much of a review to this, but I did like it. the poems were cute and funny. except for the first I didn't really understand it... but other than that Bravo I loved them
good work
-Tiffany