Rascalover

Hey, This is one very amazing piece of work you have got here, and I think once spit shined it'll be unbelievably perfect. At some areas it felt as though ...

Hey Here as requested, thank you so very much. I really enjoyed this and would love it if you would PM when continuations are posted. I really hate it when ...

Hey and thanks for requesting a review :) It’s funny how the small, unimportant memories are the ones that you remember the best. I really think it should be the ...

Hello, You have had some great reviews, so mine will be short and sweet. I think you should proff read anything and everything you post on here because it will ...

Hello, and thank you for requesting a review. I am not a fan of fantasy writing, but I do have to say you did a wonderful writing this. I do ...

Hello, Here as requested. Im so sorry it took me so long to review this, but my computer was broken and I didn't have access to another one. Anywho on ...

Hello, I have read the first chapter and didn't quiet put a real review, so here I am to review chapter two I really like this idea. PM when ever ...

Hello, It seems you have some very good reviews here :) I would suggest to expand the chapter maybe... it's just so short. Also I really want to encourage you ...

Here as requested, Thanks for the request, and I would love for a review back on chapter 15 of my romantic novel it's in my signature down below. Please and ...

Hello and Welcome to YWS, I feel the same as Apple. You have an amazing vocabulary, but I am here to also encourage you to review other's pieces of work. ...

Hello, Happy to be your reviewer for today. Man this is a really cool idea. I have seen it multiple times and wish I could do poetry like this. I ...

Hey Here as requested :) I'm sad to say that I have gotten here to late and that you already have some really good detailed reviews over your grammar and ...

Hello, Here as requested :) I do have to say this was quiet entertaining in Olivia's perspective, and because you have gotten such great reviews mine will be short and ...

hey there :D I really liked this piece. I wishe it would have been longer because it's so unique. My nitpik is that: He raises the baton and silently counts ...

Hello and Welcome to YWS, I am Tiffany and I'm happy to be amoungst your first reviewers. Before i start to review your piece I would like to encourage you ...