Rascalover

Hey, I noticed you were new to YWS, and I just wanted to wish you good luck with your future writing and encouragment to review other's writing as well. my ...

Hey, I had to do this same assignment a few years ago :) I noticed you were fairly new to YWS, so I also want to encourage you to keep ...

Hey, Thanks for requesting a review! I noticed you are fairly new to YWS, so I just wanted to encourage you to keep reviewing other peoples work and posting your ...

Hey, Thanks for requesting a review. I am more than a little confused. I didn't really understand what was going on, and even when I went back to chapter one ...

Hey, Your poems are so awesome, never stop writing! The imagery is so dark and perfect for the topic. I love how I can feel the hurt and pain from ...

Hey, Here I am again :) Yay for description and imagery! That's the thing I really like about your poems. You have alot of really helpful and awesome reviews, so ...

Hey, Sorry I am so late with your request, but I was out visiting universities :) Any who I am back, and I really liked this poem. It paints a ...

Hey, I noticed you are kind pf new to YWS, so I just want to encourage you to go out and review other people's work. Now because I haven't read ...

Hey. I am sorry that this is so late, but here I am as requested. First I will nit-pick grammatical errors then I will give you an overall view of ...

Hey. Thanks for requesting a review :) I will start out with the nit-picks of grammar then give you an overall impression of what I thought of your piece. Now ...

Hey, Thanks for requesting a review :) Now, I am not a fan of fantasy works, and I do say that I don't review fantasy in my thread, but because ...

Hey, Thank you for requesting a review :) My only nit-pick is this: The Sun crumbles down, with the chaos of day It should be the chaos of the day ...

Hey, Here I am again; I enjoyed your story line, so I'm back to review chapter two. Here's the meat of your review: I stare at my older sister, Lina. ...

Hello, I'm happy to be one of your firs reviewers :) i will be nit-picky about grammar and such things; then, I will give you an overall opinion. On to ...

Hey, Thanks for requesting a review, but I don't think I can help much with this poem because I don't really know what it's about. I can't find any meaning ...