Rascalover

You asked me to review this, but I don't see anything that I would fix. :) I love the way you made it flow and rthyme. The only thing I ...

Hello, Here I am to review. Mostly I will comment on grammatical errors. :) I had never once thought of encountering the feeling of nothingness. Never once felt the angst ...

Hello, Pretty happy to be your first reviewer :) I really loved the concept of this very orginal and unique. There was one thing that struck as not fitting: repeating ...

Hello, Thanks for requesting a review; I am finally here! this will be the shortest review ever, unfortunately. I loved this poem, and I really see no which way that ...

Hello, Thanks for requesting a review; I am finally here! For one thing, when I first looked at it all I saw was a big block of text, and honestly, ...

Hello, Thanks for requesting a review. I am finally here! I know my punctuation(timely manner) sucks, but now that I am here I will give you a hopefully nonredundant, detailed ...

Hey and thanks for requesting a review, You asked me to comment on characters, plot, and style, but first I'll pick out some grammar mistakes :) Her beanie Just a ...

Hello, I am here to review your piece of work. I don't want to come off mean, just fixing and teaching so that you can become a better writer, so ...

Hello and thanks for requesting a review, I am not familiar with this fanfiction, so I won't be able to comment on the characters or related things of that nature. ...

Hello, I really enjoyed this piece and meant to review it awhile ago, but I am here now, hopefully what I have to say hasn't been repeated. On with the ...

Hello, This is beautiful. My grandmother passed away last month, and those laast few stanzas made me tear up. There were a few grammatical errors, but I was too emtionally ...

Hey, Happy to be your first review of this piece! Determined to numb my thought I know you put it as thought so that it would rythme, but it still ...

Hell, Thank you for a review request! I haven't read chapter one, but after this I just may. For the majority of my review I will pick out grammar mistakes ...

Hey, I'm happy to be the first reviewer of your poem, and hopefully I am not the last because I really don't know what to say about this poem. It's ...

Hey, Thanks for requesting a review. For future reference it would be helpful for your reviewer if you put the link with your post when requesting a review, so that ...