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Re: To Hear Your Silence
Hey, Here as requested. When i first saw this I was like wow this is really short, but by reading it I found that i really enjoyed it! Here are ...
Nov 16, 2011 -
Re: deleted
Hey, Thanks for requesting a review! I'll comment mostly on grammar mistakes because I haven't read the other chapters, and don't know what's going on plot wise. The slab of ...
Nov 16, 2011 -
Re: The Key Room Chapter 2
Hello, Here I am again; I really enjoy this novel! I rolled over in bed, grumbling angrily as I reached for more pillows to block out the sunlight that was ...
Nov 12, 2011 -
Re: The Key Room Chapter 1
Hey, I really enjoyed reading this and can't wait for the next chapter, hopfully you continue this. “You can’t go, yet. What am I supposed to do after school when ...
Nov 9, 2011 -
Re: Holding Up
Hey, I'm here to review, hope you don't mind! Most of my review will be grammar mistakes, but I'll try to give you an overall opinion of what I think ...
Nov 9, 2011 -
Re: To Lie Down With Dogs
Hey, Thanks for requesting a review. Most of my review will be grammar mistakes, but I will try to give you an overall impression of what I think of your ...
Nov 9, 2011 -
Re: There are no tears
Hey, Thank you so much for inviting me to read this! It is beautifully written, and grammar wise, I couldn't find any mistakes. Keep doing what you're doing because it ...
Nov 7, 2011 -
Re: Rise Of The Black Queen - Chpt 0-1
Hello, Thanks for requesting a review. i don't really review science-fiction, so I might just give this a quick glance. When you request a review make sure to check the ...
Nov 7, 2011 -
Re: Railway
Hey, Thanks for requesting a review. Most of the review will be grammatical errors, but I'll try to show you an overall view of what I think. This piece is ...
Nov 4, 2011 -
Re: Catching Fear.
Hey, Thanks for requesting a review. I'm not good at reviewing song lyrics. I did like this alot, and I could really see it as being a real song. Just ...
Nov 4, 2011 -
Re: A Life Through Sad Eyes
Hey, Thanks for asking for a request. This was beautifully written. It touches your soul. You are an amazing poet. Just one mistake: the nghtmare of her life. You misspelled ...
Nov 4, 2011 -
Re: The Suns Betrayal
Hey, Thanks for asking for a review! I really don't see anything that I would change. Just one thing though, capitalize the beginning letter or every line, not just the ...
Nov 4, 2011 -
Re: Magnificent, This World Chapter One
Hey, Thanks for requesting a review! Majority of the review will be grammatical errors, but I'll try to give an overall impression of what I really think. Completely alone. This ...
Nov 4, 2011 -
Re: Or are you just deaf?
Thanks for requesting a review. I love this poem, and I wouldn't change it, but I think it would nice to know who the baby sister died and what happened ...
Oct 8, 2011 -
Re: Cloud of Pain
Thanks for requesting a review! :D It’s that constant and sharp ache, stimulated by the jolt of nerves in an affected area. It’s that imperfect flow of blood, thick and ...
Oct 8, 2011
