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  • Other » General, General Re: To Hear Your Silence

    Hey, Here as requested. When i first saw this I was like wow this is really short, but by reading it I found that i really enjoyed it! Here are ...

    Nov 16, 2011
  • Novel / Chapter » General, General Re: deleted

    Hey, Thanks for requesting a review! I'll comment mostly on grammar mistakes because I haven't read the other chapters, and don't know what's going on plot wise. The slab of ...

    Nov 16, 2011
  • Novel / Chapter » General, General Re: The Key Room Chapter 2

    Hello, Here I am again; I really enjoy this novel! I rolled over in bed, grumbling angrily as I reached for more pillows to block out the sunlight that was ...

    Nov 12, 2011
  • Novel / Chapter » General, General Re: The Key Room Chapter 1

    Hey, I really enjoyed reading this and can't wait for the next chapter, hopfully you continue this. “You can’t go, yet. What am I supposed to do after school when ...

    Nov 9, 2011
  • Short Story » General, General Re: Holding Up

    Hey, I'm here to review, hope you don't mind! Most of my review will be grammar mistakes, but I'll try to give you an overall opinion of what I think ...

    Nov 9, 2011
  • Short Story » General, General Re: To Lie Down With Dogs

    Hey, Thanks for requesting a review. Most of my review will be grammar mistakes, but I will try to give you an overall impression of what I think of your ...

    Nov 9, 2011
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: There are no tears

    Hey, Thank you so much for inviting me to read this! It is beautifully written, and grammar wise, I couldn't find any mistakes. Keep doing what you're doing because it ...

    Nov 7, 2011
  • Novel / Chapter » Science Fiction, General Re: Rise Of The Black Queen - Chpt 0-1

    Hello, Thanks for requesting a review. i don't really review science-fiction, so I might just give this a quick glance. When you request a review make sure to check the ...

    Nov 7, 2011
  • Short Story » General, General Re: Railway

    Hey, Thanks for requesting a review. Most of the review will be grammatical errors, but I'll try to show you an overall view of what I think. This piece is ...

    Nov 4, 2011
  • Lyrics » General, General Re: Catching Fear.

    Hey, Thanks for requesting a review. I'm not good at reviewing song lyrics. I did like this alot, and I could really see it as being a real song. Just ...

    Nov 4, 2011
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: A Life Through Sad Eyes

    Hey, Thanks for asking for a request. This was beautifully written. It touches your soul. You are an amazing poet. Just one mistake: the nghtmare of her life. You misspelled ...

    Nov 4, 2011
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: The Suns Betrayal

    Hey, Thanks for asking for a review! I really don't see anything that I would change. Just one thing though, capitalize the beginning letter or every line, not just the ...

    Nov 4, 2011
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, General Re: Magnificent, This World Chapter One

    Hey, Thanks for requesting a review! Majority of the review will be grammatical errors, but I'll try to give an overall impression of what I really think. Completely alone. This ...

    Nov 4, 2011
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Or are you just deaf?

    Thanks for requesting a review. I love this poem, and I wouldn't change it, but I think it would nice to know who the baby sister died and what happened ...

    Oct 8, 2011
  • Short Story » General, General Re: Cloud of Pain

    Thanks for requesting a review! :D It’s that constant and sharp ache, stimulated by the jolt of nerves in an affected area. It’s that imperfect flow of blood, thick and ...

    Oct 8, 2011


Painting is poetry that is seen rather than felt, and poetry is painting that is felt rather than seen.
— Leonardo da Vinci