Raquelle

Hi there, so I noticed you tried to make a few rhythm in your poem. Its sound so nice and indeed interesting. Today is the day when Rules will be ...

Hi TinyDream, I really like the concept here. Written in narrative form and has a clear plot. There once was a girl, And when there’s a girl, There is usually ...

Hi fortis, the first thing I noticed here was the repetition in the first stanza. It might be nice to use in some cases, but here it seems a bit ...

Hi Dream, so I should start by saying 'wonderful poem' to read. The metaphor work so nice in the first stanza. You managed to describe the reality and a dream ...

Hi cailey, this is Raq with first review on your poem. I love the poem that portrays the feeling a traveler who was visiting an amazing place. Like you with ...