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Rapunzel321

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  • Poetry » Fantasy, Dramatic Re: Phoenix

    The title really grabbed my attention considering that I just so happen to be writing my own myth about the Phoenix. By the way, you spelled it wrong in your ...

    Jun 3, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Historical Fiction, Narrative Re: Hatshepsut: the Forgotten Pharaoh (Chapter 3)

    I really like that you showed the point in time where Hatsheput decided to dress like a man and become a pharaoh. I remember reading about this in class and ...

    Jun 1, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Historical Fiction, Narrative Re: Hatshepsut: The Forgotten Pharaoh ( Chapter 2)

    WOW!!!!!!! I didn't expect that at all. This mysterious stranger really peaks my interest. It makes me wonder how he knew she was there, how he got her out of ...

    May 31, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Historical Fiction, Narrative Re: Hatshepsut: the Forgotten Pharaoh

    When I saw the title I thought that this would just be some historical account of Hatsheput but I was wrong. For once I'm glad that I wasn't right. I ...

    May 31, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » General, Fantasy Re: Triden

    I really liked the fact that you was able to use your own imagination to create your own 'good vs. evil" fantasy land. I'm all for the good side beating ...

    May 31, 2014
  • Poetry » Lyrical, Romantic Re: Dancing in Memories

    This just seems so magical. I wish that I had a moment like this with someone, but I don't think it's going to happen. The next best thing is reading ...

    May 30, 2014
  • Lyrics » Romantic, General Re: Never Said Goodbye

    I really enjoyed this. I've always tried to make up my own lyrics but I was always unsuccessful. The part about this that impresses me the most is that you ...

    May 30, 2014
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Lyrical Re: Catch the Wind

    I would love to Catch the Wind. :) I have never really seen life like this, but everyone has a different opinion on life and I'm glad to have been ...

    May 30, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Fanfiction, Teen Fiction Re: The Road To My Heart. Chapter #1

    I am a big fan of The Hunger Games and I take it you are to. I really liked the fact that you made it your own. I would think ...

    May 26, 2014
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Dear Disney

    I can tell you feel strongly about this. I like the fact that you used some of the main symbols in the Disney movies like "flying arabian rugs," from Aladdin ...

    May 26, 2014


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