RandomGrrl

Very creepy, nice length, and thought provoking. Thank you! RG

Ha. Beat me too this one. No fair. IT'S ON! Jk. What can I say? Fantastic.

AAH! I know I need to space the paragraphs better, it won't let me edit it yet... I'll do it as soon as poss. Hate that... Anyway, please share your ...

I love this! So funny, but so true. I love love love the ending, but there's a few obvious mistakes I'm sure you'll find. This is sheer brilliance! PM me ...

I like everything you write. :D Glad you decided ta join!

Hey ya'll! Thanks for the crits. This poem is actually very difficult to explain. The "I knew you twice" line is not explained in the poem, but its true in ...

Hey there! Kay you all, I kind of left Suffocating in there multiple times because the title is Suffocating, and that was my theme... However, if you all think its ...

Nice, I really like it. Keep writing! :D

Yes! The art is perfected! Love it. Don't change anything else. :D RG

Really nice, love the imagery. You mispelled invisible up there... says "invisable". 'Sides that, I love it... freaky!

Eh, nothing to crit. I adore this! So beautiful!

AH! Don't listen! (sorry Niteowl :D ) The details are great! Love it love it. Don't change a thing.

I liked this, the idea behind it, however, I would request a little more rhythm. If it isn't meant to have rhythm, then, hey, way to go for stepping outside ...

Darn... Just realized I've brought up another month old post... Sorry everyone! :D

Wow wow wow! Great. I can't find a thing to crit!