RanaNoodles

Hi! I am absolutely in love with the name Mr.Clay. For some reason, I was expecting something more adult and sophisticated, but this works just as well! Mr.Clay actually kind ...

Hi! Firstly, congratulations for being on YWS for so long! I’ve only been on YWS for about three days, so five years seems like a million centuries (I don’t feel ...

Hi! Okay, I absolutely love this piece. Even the title is so powerful! It sounds so proud and bold. The poem didn't really sound like a poem, per se, but ...

Hi! So, your story starts in past tense. I really like that, even though I generally don't like to write or read in past tense. It was all so well ...

Hi! This poem is so thought-provoking. I love how, in the second stanza, you refer to making memories not as 'making memories', but 'defining memories' and 'writing memories'. Also, in ...

Hi! I just want to point out the vocabulary in this poem! I had to search 'subaqueous' up on Google to figure out what it meant, but it's really fitting ...

Hello! I'm not exactly sure how you can say you're terrible at writing beginnings. I've only read this once and I already want to see what's going to happen! The ...

Hi! I love the description in this poem! It makes everything so clear, but somehow there's still some ambiguity in it, things that are up to the reader to decide ...

Hi! This poem is so amazing. I love all of it, but especially how the first line is bolded, because it emphasizes the theme of the poem itself, and it's ...

Hi! I’m new to YWS, so I’m sorry if this review isn’t up to scratch...? I’m just really in awe with this poem. Usually, with poems that don’t rhyme, they ...