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Re: The Boy Who hated Lefties
Gay as in happy, I presume.
Mar 31, 2015 - Re: Going through Time--Chapter Nineteen: Jaz?... Mar 31, 2015
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Re: Gifted: Chapter 2 Chad
Agh! I'm sorry. >.< I just checked back at chapter 1; it is in third person. My bad.
Mar 31, 2015 -
Re: Gifted: Chapter 2 Chad
It was in third person? 0.o oh. Maybe I just forgot. Hehe. Okie, I'll be waiting!
Mar 31, 2015 -
Re: Gifted: Chapter 2 Chad
Oh! I also forgot to mention - you might want to break up your second to last paragraph a lil, it has a lot of different pars to it, and ...
Mar 30, 2015 -
Re: Gifted: Chapter 1 You've got to be kidding me?
Ah, all right! I can't wait for the next chapters :)
Mar 30, 2015 -
Re: Silver Lining - Chapter 2
Thanks! Yep - first person. I'll try and get more emotion into the next chapter, emotion and imagery are the hardest for me to write about >.< Thanks again! :)
Mar 30, 2015 -
Re: Silver Lining - Chapter 2
Hi! I'll try and work on that more in the third chapter, thank you so much for the suggestion! And thanks for reviewing ^.^
Mar 30, 2015 -
Re: My Willow Tree
^.^ That I am. Haha.
Mar 30, 2015 -
Re: My Willow Tree
Amazingly done... *claps*
Mar 30, 2015 -
Re: The Case Of The Sleepy Town Named Death [Ch.2]
Ah, I see. I had a feeling it was based on the first chapter. Yes, yes, very colorful. :P
Mar 29, 2015 -
Re: Bubbles
Thank you so much for this review! As for line breaks... Oh, um, i don't know. >.< Lol. Thanks again~
Mar 29, 2015 -
Re: Eclipse
Sure! Hmm. You could keep 'Eclipse' in it, but add another word, perhaps? I'm not entirely sure (I suck at titles too, lol).
Mar 29, 2015 -
Re: Bubbles
Thanks! I'll go changed 'aroused' right now. Happy Review Day! :D Ketchup shall crush you.
Mar 29, 2015 - Re: Eclipse Mar 29, 2015