Raindeer

Hey! Is this going to be a novel and is this chapter one? It's small but maybe adding "Chapter 1" to the title could help organize, especially in the future ...

Hey again! So, we get to know a bit more about magic this chapter (it's draining, it's not overly powerful) as well as more about Kara. I love Kara so ...

Hey, regismare! You've already got 4 lovely reviews on this but I thought I'd pop in anyway, because I wanted to read and review chapter 3 too.

Hey felistia! Before I start I just wanted to mention the title of the chapter doesn't quite make sense. Maybe you meant "The Dream of Felistia"? Resorting to just "The ...

Hey felistia! This chapter was pretty nice and I love how we get views of all the different places - Sulphur Swamps (did you mean to do sulphur, by the ...

Hey felistia! I reviewed the last chapter already (it was actually the first chapter I had reviewed!) so here I am. I'm on my phone again, apologies for weird things ...

Yo, Soulkana! So, another interesting chapter! We get to know some things and vampires. I love vampires, and I'm excited to see how they're going to be portrayed in your ...

Hey! Soo, dialogue filled chapter! We get more of the character's shown through this. I liked Shiraku's dialogue -- to an extent. After a while it did get a bit ...

Hey felistia! Another review day review for you~ Oops, so I remember from two chapters ago I had said that I was confused as to why they were going to ...

Hi felistia! Happy review day! ^-^ Sorry if this review is short - the chapter is a bit shorter this time! I'm really excited for them to get to the ...

Hey! I actually haven't read very many werewolf stories, so this was an exciting read! Werewolves are pretty cool creatures and I'm really interested to see what you're going to ...

Heyo! Woo, awesome chapter. :] I'm glad to see Emerald again - and this time we figured out her name! There was quite a lot of dialogue but I found ...

Yo, Braiden! I apologize in advance for not reading the previous chapters - I saw this guy in the green room and decided to drop in and give it a ...

Hey! Happy Thursday! :D This was quite the interesting read! I'm especially digging the ending; it felt like it pulled together the story nicely. Though flying towards the sunset seems ...

Hey regismare! Wow, so this was quite the read. I think I'm in love with your characters already. The instant the girl was described I knew she would make for ...