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Re: Huntress: Chapter 2.1- Pride [Edited; LMS]
Yo, featherstone! Interesting chapter. We get to know more about this village (clan? village? tribe?) she joined and not a ton was revealed but enough to keep me engaged! I ...
Mar 7, 2017 -
Re: Unsafe ~ Chapter 7
Hey dogs! Awesome chapter - we found out about a lot and Irene and Izzy are friends again. Irene seems to become friends with Izzy very quickly, and I understand ...
Mar 6, 2017 -
Re: Estée
Hey! Is this going to be a novel and is this chapter one? It's small but maybe adding "Chapter 1" to the title could help organize, especially in the future ...
Mar 5, 2017 -
Re: LMS: Perfect Machine 3
Hey again! So, we get to know a bit more about magic this chapter (it's draining, it's not overly powerful) as well as more about Kara. I love Kara so ...
Mar 5, 2017 -
Re: LMS: Perfect Machine 2
Hey, regismare! You've already got 4 lovely reviews on this but I thought I'd pop in anyway, because I wanted to read and review chapter 3 too.
Mar 4, 2017 -
Re: Quest for Fire ~ Chapter 21 ~ The Dream Felistia
Hey felistia! Before I start I just wanted to mention the title of the chapter doesn't quite make sense. Maybe you meant "The Dream of Felistia"? Resorting to just "The ...
Mar 4, 2017 -
Re: Quest for Fire ~ Chapter 20 ~ The Journey
Hey felistia! This chapter was pretty nice and I love how we get views of all the different places - Sulphur Swamps (did you mean to do sulphur, by the ...
Mar 3, 2017 -
Re: Quest for Fire ~ Chapter 19 ~ Megalonia
Hey felistia! I reviewed the last chapter already (it was actually the first chapter I had reviewed!) so here I am. I'm on my phone again, apologies for weird things ...
Mar 2, 2017 -
Re: Frozen Honor Chapter 1 LMS week 2
Yo, Soulkana! So, another interesting chapter! We get to know some things and vampires. I love vampires, and I'm excited to see how they're going to be portrayed in your ...
Mar 1, 2017 -
Re: Quest for Fire ~ Chapter 17 ~ Meeting the Outsiders
Hey! Soo, dialogue filled chapter! We get more of the character's shown through this. I liked Shiraku's dialogue -- to an extent. After a while it did get a bit ...
Feb 28, 2017 -
Re: Quest for Fire ~ Chapter 16 ~ Spotted
Hey felistia! Another review day review for you~ Oops, so I remember from two chapters ago I had said that I was confused as to why they were going to ...
Feb 26, 2017 -
Re: Quest for Fire ~ Chapter 15 ~ The Wisp Talon Village
Hi felistia! Happy review day! ^-^ Sorry if this review is short - the chapter is a bit shorter this time! I'm really excited for them to get to the ...
Feb 26, 2017 -
Re: Huntress: Chapter 1- Pack [Edited; LMS]
Hey! I actually haven't read very many werewolf stories, so this was an exciting read! Werewolves are pretty cool creatures and I'm really interested to see what you're going to ...
Feb 25, 2017 -
Re: Quest for Fire ~ Chapter 14 ~ Not Again
Heyo! Woo, awesome chapter. :] I'm glad to see Emerald again - and this time we figured out her name! There was quite a lot of dialogue but I found ...
Feb 25, 2017 -
Re: 'When I Think Of You' - Chapter 6
Yo, Braiden! I apologize in advance for not reading the previous chapters - I saw this guy in the green room and decided to drop in and give it a ...
Feb 24, 2017
