RainbowPowerPonies

Hi, RainbowPowerPonies here with a review on this wonderful review day! Wow, this is really good. So, I like how you used short lines to get your meaning across, and ...

Thank you, I do have a tune for this The boat on Hell is a SLIGHT allusion the the boat on the River Styx. I'm glad u got it I ...

To explain, lied for her IS the correct word I was going for, she was told at an early age but Claire has no intension of lying. Her parents tell ...

Nightcrawler, to clear this up, yes this IS meant to go on the back of the book as a short intrigue into the story, I was told this is called ...

:D sure just tell me a time that's good for you 2morow

Thank you so much, I wanted to ask you if you would like to be another character in our story?

Thank you, I wanted to clear up that further on the details get more intense, the idea of the first chapter is to introduce you to the characters personalities and ...

to clear things up, Drago and Krystal are sisters and they are also best friends. thank you for your review

Hey everyone! @OliveDreams @Tenyo @dragonfphoenix @blacknwhiteeagle100 @mephistophelesangfel and @AdrianMoon I'm continuing with this. @Dragofriend1234 may or may not be continuing it with me though.

Thank you, everyone, for the help.

I rejoined review day a while back because of this review :)

This was helpful, Undetermined is the title and It's being worked on so the poem will be added to. Thats why there is a comma.

^.^ only the besy of reviews to the best of works

okay :D

you are, are you working on chapt. 2? please PM me wen u publish it.