Raimunda

Hey thevoiceinside I like it. You get your point across and you do it in a charming way. It reminds me of a hymn that I can't remember the name ...

What is life, but a collection of strife carried on right through the years What is death, But just a final rest an ending of those tiresome tears? Why is ...

Alone Lovely is the moonligt lovely are the stars yet voices from the doorway aslike Is this 'like' or 'as'? approaching sharks Slightly odd similie here. Sharks? Of all the ...

I like it. It's really sad and depressing, but it's clever and the rhymes don't seem forced. It flows, man. I wasn't so sure about the use of the word ...

I really like this. It isnt traditional, but its illustrative of how you feel about God, or about how the narrator feels about God. I really got how inspirational he ...

I don't know if you could have written this using the SHOW DONT TELL method. If you were just writing a poem of analogies, this is okay; you got your ...

Haha made me laugh. I don't live in America so I don't have this annoyance. but every time my dad wants to watch the football and stops me watching heroes ...

Loved the last verse. So much. But I completely disagree with the concept of the poem; maybe we just go to different schools, but I love mine! I think that ...

Schizz, if you don't think this is good, I'd love to read something of yours you think's amazing. And I love the idea of being inspired by colours. Maybe you ...

This is some immense shizz. I don't really think I can review this, because there's just no point! It's amazing. I hope when I'm as old as you I'll be ...

As requested here is my brilliant and unparalled review. I really, really like this. It's a really unusual thing to write, and I think that the unusuallness of it make ...

Schiz, I love this bit: Esteemed professionals might gasp-- ‘Plan your story, or it will turn out wrong!’ But I’m not in the least bit ashamed to disclose, I make ...

I stolidly do not believe in writers block, but I thought that this poem kind of explained to me what it must be like. If it existed. "Two days later ...

Au Contrare!!! I love wierd formatting. Its makes layouts more interesting to read. And I like this. Its not a usual poem. People are always writing about love betweens girls ...

I think as a way of telling the story, it was good- I knew what the woman was going through, and I understood her general feelings. But, I dunno, I ...