Rafe14

I've read quite a few of your poems and the first thing i'd like to congratulate you on is that you no longer capitalize every word WHOO well done! I ...

Im going to make this quick. There were a few spelling errors but i wont go into that. I would say the poem throughout was average. Still good but nothing ...

Whoaaa. I must admit that this poem in certain areas was hard to understand but i think that was because of my lack in knowledge so just ignore that. However ...

Lovely. This proves that poems don't have to rhyme to engage their readers. I love the fact that the reader thinks your referring to a lover until the final stanza. ...

I'm going to be honest here. There were a few spelling errors which you may need to attend to. I liked the imagery you put in this poem especially when ...

Hey. Really good poem. I think you really engaged your readers especially when you say about slitting wrists as the readers can relate to that. I feel as though I ...