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Re: Characters for a Potential Story
Hey, Winny, you have really put a lot of work into Roleplaying these characters so good Job! My first impression is wow that a lot of characters. Like a lot. ...
Jan 26, 2020 -
Re: Love Part 3
Aw, this is super sweet. I think we have all had a crush and been a little disappointed when they missed school. I like that you made this relatable yet ...
Jan 26, 2020 -
Re: Be Careful Who You Trust Chapter 15.1
That wolf boy should have nothing on him and yet he was continuously stealing her away from him.-okay i am sorry nathan but you haven''t really made an effort. Okay ...
Dec 7, 2019 -
Re: Be Careful Who You Trust Chapter 14
YES fine-a-leeeeee KATIE FIGHTS! "I need to know, Katie. I can't sit here not knowing where I stand with you. I know that we've had our differences but don't we ...
Dec 7, 2019 -
Re: Be Careful Who You Trust Chapter 13
"You know Nathan, for being so caring towards me, you really are a dick to your Mom." I said, my voice betraying just how angry I felt, OHHHOHOHOOO yup nathan ...
Dec 7, 2019 -
Re: 01. The Invisible Kid
I like your focus of realism, it really is moving. "Have you ever wondered what pulls a friend group together? " I like how you started this off with a ...
Dec 4, 2019 -
Re: Be Careful Who You Trust Chapter 12
First of all bravo, because you used a device without auto correct. “She was his, no matter what he had to do to gain her trust.” Yeah you get the ...
Dec 2, 2019 -
Re: Be Careful Who You Trust Chapter 11
I am guessing this is sage. And by literal dog that means he is a werewolf. ANd for the love of all that is holy KATIE NEEDS TO LEARN TO ...
Dec 2, 2019 -
Re: Be Careful Who You Trust Chapter 10.2
“I’m sorry for your loss, Katie. It must be hard on you, Zander paused for a long moment, especially at such a time in your life. Too tired to feel ...
Dec 2, 2019 -
Re: Be Careful Who You Trust Chapter 10.1
Okay so idk why but james makes me mad. I am sorry honora I hope this isn’t mean, just as a character he really pisses me off. Is he going ...
Dec 1, 2019 -
Re: Be Careful Who You Trust Chapter 9.2
Yeah my favorite vampire is back!!!!!! I love zander what left is there to say. Please, Zander. Leave her alone.” I pleaded. Something in his eyes told me that that ...
Dec 1, 2019 -
Re: Heart Shadows, Chapter 1
OMG, SHE HAS RED HAIR!!!! I AM TEARING UP EVER! I love main characters with red hair, us redheads are never made into main characters ever! Redheads are pretty too ...
Dec 1, 2019 -
Re: Emperor's Heir - Chapter 1
WOW! Just WOW! I loved this so much. I am sorry I am so behind on your novel, but I am a book leech(well I am actually very picky, but ...
Nov 28, 2019 -
Re: Ghazal for Her
I love the feeling of the season changing. There is also a lot of raw emotion and I really appreciate that. It feels like your talking about the real deeper ...
Nov 27, 2019 -
Re: I want to close the window, but you have fallen asleep
Aww, this really hit home. This is such a sweet soft concept. I think we forget the smallest little things can mean so much. Your poem is very concise yet ...
Nov 27, 2019
