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Raelyn

Raelyn

  • Other » General, General Re: Characters for a Potential Story

    Hey, Winny, you have really put a lot of work into Roleplaying these characters so good Job! My first impression is wow that a lot of characters. Like a lot. ...

    Jan 26, 2020
  • Short Story » General, Romantic Re: Love Part 3

    Aw, this is super sweet. I think we have all had a crush and been a little disappointed when they missed school. I like that you made this relatable yet ...

    Jan 26, 2020
  • Novel / Chapter » Dramatic, Fantasy Re: Be Careful Who You Trust Chapter 15.1

    That wolf boy should have nothing on him and yet he was continuously stealing her away from him.-okay i am sorry nathan but you haven''t really made an effort. Okay ...

    Dec 7, 2019
  • Novel / Chapter » Dramatic, Fantasy Re: Be Careful Who You Trust Chapter 14

    YES fine-a-leeeeee KATIE FIGHTS! "I need to know, Katie. I can't sit here not knowing where I stand with you. I know that we've had our differences but don't we ...

    Dec 7, 2019
  • Novel / Chapter » Dramatic, Fantasy Re: Be Careful Who You Trust Chapter 13

    "You know Nathan, for being so caring towards me, you really are a dick to your Mom." I said, my voice betraying just how angry I felt, OHHHOHOHOOO yup nathan ...

    Dec 7, 2019
  • Novel / Chapter » Teen Fiction, Teen Fiction Re: 01. The Invisible Kid

    I like your focus of realism, it really is moving. "Have you ever wondered what pulls a friend group together? " I like how you started this off with a ...

    Dec 4, 2019
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Dramatic Re: Be Careful Who You Trust Chapter 12

    First of all bravo, because you used a device without auto correct. “She was his, no matter what he had to do to gain her trust.” Yeah you get the ...

    Dec 2, 2019
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Dramatic Re: Be Careful Who You Trust Chapter 11

    I am guessing this is sage. And by literal dog that means he is a werewolf. ANd for the love of all that is holy KATIE NEEDS TO LEARN TO ...

    Dec 2, 2019
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Dramatic Re: Be Careful Who You Trust Chapter 10.2

    “I’m sorry for your loss, Katie. It must be hard on you, Zander paused for a long moment, especially at such a time in your life. Too tired to feel ...

    Dec 2, 2019
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Dramatic Re: Be Careful Who You Trust Chapter 10.1

    Okay so idk why but james makes me mad. I am sorry honora I hope this isn’t mean, just as a character he really pisses me off. Is he going ...

    Dec 1, 2019
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Dramatic Re: Be Careful Who You Trust Chapter 9.2

    Yeah my favorite vampire is back!!!!!! I love zander what left is there to say. Please, Zander. Leave her alone.” I pleaded. Something in his eyes told me that that ...

    Dec 1, 2019
  • Novel / Chapter » General, Teen Fiction Re: Heart Shadows, Chapter 1

    OMG, SHE HAS RED HAIR!!!! I AM TEARING UP EVER! I love main characters with red hair, us redheads are never made into main characters ever! Redheads are pretty too ...

    Dec 1, 2019
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: Emperor's Heir - Chapter 1

    WOW! Just WOW! I loved this so much. I am sorry I am so behind on your novel, but I am a book leech(well I am actually very picky, but ...

    Nov 28, 2019
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Romantic Re: Ghazal for Her

    I love the feeling of the season changing. There is also a lot of raw emotion and I really appreciate that. It feels like your talking about the real deeper ...

    Nov 27, 2019
  • Poetry » Romantic, General Re: I want to close the window, but you have fallen asleep

    Aww, this really hit home. This is such a sweet soft concept. I think we forget the smallest little things can mean so much. Your poem is very concise yet ...

    Nov 27, 2019


A non-writing writer is a monster courting insanity.
— Franz Kafka