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Re: Chronicles of Valarian 0: The Fifth of the Four Ancient Foxes
Hi Lezuli, I know I'm incredibly late to review this but I was looking for stuff to review for RevMo and I came across your story. And what better a ...
Sep 4, 2020 -
Re: The Kidnapping at Hoffman Lane (NEW & IMPROVED)
Hello again TeyaKnife, I'm here to review the new and improved version. Let me start off by saying that this version is a lot better than the one before it. ...
Sep 4, 2020 -
Re: Chapter 1 : The girl from the library
Hi MoonIrus, I saw chapters 3 and 4 of this in the green room and were intrigued. So I decided to review every chapter so far, starting with this one. ...
Sep 4, 2020 -
Re: The Flower of Death
Hi TheNae, this is a great piece you have here. I really love the mysterious elements at the beginning and the action at the end. I just have a few ...
Sep 4, 2020 -
Re: The Kidnapping at Hoffman Lane
Hi TeyaKnife, let me start of by saying this is a exiting and very thrilling start to what I hope to be an incredible novel. Was hooked by the concept ...
Sep 1, 2020 -
Re: End of History - Chapter One
Hey, solarpunk! Let me start off by saying this is an amazing start to the story. Onto the review. To start off, this could just be me but I don't ...
Jul 19, 2020 -
Re: America Gone - Two
Hey Vilnius! This was a great second chapter! It was one the shorter side of things but thats not really a problem. I like how you implemented Austin explaining everything ...
Jul 16, 2020 -
Re: Love With out Impurities
Hey Chakrarao, this is a great short story. I really like this, I just have a few critiques. There were a few grammer issues so maybe consider running this through ...
Jul 16, 2020 -
Re: America Gone - One
Hey Vilnus! Wow, what an amazing start to this world your building! I really love all of the characters already. Just a few pieces of advice. I would find a ...
Jul 15, 2020 -
Re: America Gone - Prologue
Hey Vilnus. What an amazing and captivating start to your story. I really love how you grip the reader. It felt like you were maybe telling and not showing. For ...
Jul 15, 2020 -
Re: The Prince of Heaven and Hell (Chapter 2- Backlash From The System)
Hey, RadDog here. Wow, what an amazing continuation of your story. Now for the review. You should probably try to combine some of these many sentences into 1 paragraph. It ...
Jul 14, 2020 -
Re: Chapter #2
Hey Prim Rose! Let me start by saying wow. This is such a great continuation of the first chapter. I have one thing that I noticed when reading your story. ...
Jul 14, 2020 -
Re: Chapter #1
Hello Prim Rose! This is an amazing start to a fantastic story! I love this first chapter and cant wait to read more. Lets get onto the review. I see ...
Jul 14, 2020 -
Re: Friends Throughout Time 1/?
Hello! I really love this story, the hook was amazing and the cliff hanger at the end left we wanting more. The only thing that I think could be better ...
Jul 14, 2020 -
Re: Chapter 1
Hey! I know I'm a little late to review this, but here it goes. You did great at the story but it was kind of hard to read. It didn't ...
Jul 14, 2020