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Re: Wildfires (Part 2)
Hi @Rosewood, RadDog here! This is an amazing second installment in the Wildfires story. I hope that you come out with another chapter and maybe make it a novel. Anyways, ...
Sep 14, 2020 -
Re: Wildfires (Part 1)
Hi @Rosewood, RadDog here to review your story today. First Impressions: I really like how it almost felt like a superhero origin story. I like the mysterious aspect and the ...
Sep 14, 2020 -
Re: rain.
Hi @PlainandSimple, RadDog here! I'll be reviewing your short story today. First Impressions: I really like this. It's mysterious enough that it let the reader make assumptions on what was ...
Sep 13, 2020 -
Re: The dark monster (a very short story)
Hi @Ken95, RadDog here! Let me start off by saying that this was an amazing piece. I really enjoyed reading it. It was really good how you managed to fit ...
Sep 12, 2020 -
Re: The Pink Flower
Hi, @0blank0, Raddog here! Let me start off by saying I love this piece. The word choice was superb and the formatting flowed well. I was really surprised by the ...
Sep 12, 2020 -
Re: An Apocalyptic Funeral
Hi @bloom3544, RadDog here! This piece is amazing and I love all of the aspects of it. It really tapped into my emotions and made me think. As far as ...
Sep 11, 2020 -
Re: Funeral Chapter Segments
Hi @oceans, I'm gonna review your work today! First off this is a really amazing piece. It really tapped into my emotions and made me think. You did a great ...
Sep 10, 2020 -
Re: Sappho and the End of the World
Hi @Vita! I'm here to review this piece. Let me start off by saying that this was a wonderful piece of writing. For it being such a short story, it ...
Sep 9, 2020 -
Re: log 1 - lany evergale.
Hi, CalmlyInDanger! I know I'm a little late to review this but decided to do it for RevMo. Anyways, "I should have never been brave enough to set foot in ...
Sep 7, 2020 -
Re: Frozen in Time
Hi, Creative Username! I'll be reviewing your work today. This is a very interesting and entertaining short story that I really enjoyed reading. I just have a few minor edits ...
Sep 7, 2020 -
Re: The Darkness
Hey Password, I'm a little late to review this but decided to do it for RevMo. This was a really great short story. It not only delivered an amazing message ...
Sep 6, 2020 -
Re: Chronicles of Valarian 4: Eye for an Eye
Hi Lezuli, RadDog here reviewing chapter 4. Rocks jutted up from the soil and the bright rays of twilight shining off of their surfaces made it look like they were ...
Sep 6, 2020 -
Re: Chronicles of Valarian 3: A Will Not Your Own
Hi Lezuli, here to review chapter 3. This was a very good chapter that even further dives into the lore of the Great Worlds. It was really interesting to learn ...
Sep 5, 2020 -
Re: Chronicles of Valarian 2: A Fate Worse Than Death
Hi Lezuli, here to review chapter 2! This is a really good 2nd chapter that provides insight and world building. I don't have a lot of critiques on this but ...
Sep 5, 2020 -
Re: Chronicles of Valarian 1: Foxes and Wolves
Hi, Lazuli! I'm here to review chapter 1 of your story. This is a great entry to the novel and I love how Val is so defensive about her feelings. ...
Sep 4, 2020