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Hey @Andrewknorpp, RadDog here for a review! This was a great short story. The horror was good and I think it would be great for a Ghost Walk. Before I ...

Hi @missmarvelle, RadDog here to review your piece! This is a great first chapter that introduces the main characters well. I feel that bonding that you should have with the ...

Hi @Vita, RadDog here to review chapter II of Corrupted Courage . I'm really liking these fighting scenes, they feel full of action and very realistic. Though at some parts ...

Hello @Vita, RadDog here! I know I'm late to review this but I saw chapter 10 in the green room and couldn't resist. Onto the review! This is a great ...

Hi @Stormblessed242, RadDog here to review the 4th part of The Day That Man Won . This was a really great part though it felt like not too much happened. ...

Hi @BlackThorne, RadDog here! Damn, this chapter is kind of dark. The ending really got under my skin, this butterfly wing fungus is creepy. Cutos if that what you were ...

Hi @BlackThorne, RadDog here! This was a really good second chapter. I really like your writing style with switching perspectives a lot. Though sometimes it can be a little bit ...

Hi @BlackThorne, RadDog here! This is a really creepy chapter. I love how you managed to have a very abstract chapter with lots of perspective changes but also made it ...

Hi, @BlackThorne, RadDog here! I know I'm incredibly late to this but I saw chapter 15 in the green room and I thought for RevMo I would review this. Anyways, ...

Hi @Stormblesses242, RadDog here! I'll be reviewing thee 4th part of The Day That Man Won . This was a very emotional part. I really felt like I was forming ...

Hi @Stormblessed242, RadDog here! I'll be reviewing the 3rd part of your series The Day That Man Won . I really enjoyed the action here. It was gory and exiting, ...

Hi @Stormblessed, RadDog here! As I said in the introduction, I will be reviewing your series The Day That Man Won . I really enjoyed this start. It was thrilling ...

Hi @Stormblessed. RadDog here! I'll be reviewing your piece The Day That Man Won today. I really like the premise of the story. You're intro was really good and got ...

Hi @Ruby68, RadDog here! I'll be reviewing your piece The Moth today. Let me start off by saying this is a beautiful piece. Each paragraph was very delicate and light. ...

Hi @Three_Beanz_In_A_Tux, RadDog here. Welcome to YWS! I hope you enjoy it here around the site. But with that out of the way, onto the review! "Here's your drink!" The ...