RachelLescano

Please read again the review I've given and kindly look for something I've changed. Just a correction :)) Thanks. :)

Thank you! :)

It really helped me a lot. Thanks for the review. :) I will be careful on these important points to remember next time.

The title is good! It is a catchy one. I like it! I think you successfully delivered to the readers the ideas that you want to share. You have good ...

This topic is really different from the others as you compare two leading brands in the field of technology in your article. You thoroughly discussed the differences between the two. ...

"For example, our cellular phones and computers that are used to communicate."- I suggest for minor editing on this part to make the details more clear and understandable. "...and to ...

“Technology is a gift of God” (Freeman Dyson), its talk about that technology is one of the God’s gifts from us.- revision of this statement would be a good step. ...

I didn't saw major mistakes with your work. I like it! Your article is very informative and when someone read this, he/she will really get additional information with those new ...

Good job for balancing what are the specific pros and cons of technology. But I think it would be made better if unity and coherence with some of the details ...

The introduction part is good. You have clearly show the connection of what chocolates possess with that of technology . Nice essay. I had been hooked by chocolates. :))