RachelLeeAnn

Thank you! Your points have been noted. No, I haven't done any song lyrics. I've toyed with the idea of it, though.

Thank you for your input! I changed the ending a little bit. Is this better? "So, alas, I'm walking blind; I'm walking by myself; Hoping maybe I will find a ...

You should probably delete this to get it out of the green room. :)

Thanks so much! :)

I see what you're saying. I've changed "my eyes are closed" to "I shut my eyes." Is that better?

The repetition problem has been fixed. It was on purpose, but I can see how it's distracting. As for not being able to relate: I'm not really sure how to ...

Thank you for your input! I've changed it just a tad. What do you think now?

Yes; much better!

Wow, that means so much to me! Thank you! And ah, I see! I think that's a great idea there: if you can somehow find a way to portray that, ...

Thanks for your input:) The reason I used "with the ghost of you" is because of the rules of haikus. Haikus are always 5syllables-7syllables-5syllables. Changing it to "with your ghost" ...

Thank you! I'm glad you feel you can relate. :)

Thank you! Your edits have been noted. Im glad you enjoyed it otherwise! :)

Yeah, you nailed that. Haha I'm glad you enjoyed it :)

Thank you so much. :)

Thank you so much! I love reading the reviews you always leave for me. :)