Rachel32

This is pretty amazing. First off, I completely agree with what you’re saying about the education system. I like the way the poem is set up visually. It is very ...

A NOTE: Published on my phone, so it's not spaced like I want it to be.

Okay, I see on that last part what you meant, now. I think it was just a matter of the way I read it versus the way it should have ...

The way I pronounce "prayer" this does rhyme. I kind of say it all in one syllable. Also, the two lines you want me to expand on are the lines ...

Hint on the POV: not actually a character, you'll have to do some research into the time period.