Rachel32

This is pretty amazing. First off, I completely agree with what you’re saying about the education system. I like the way the poem is set up visually. It is very ...

This is an interesting work. The imagery you use is very vivid, making it easy for the readers to insert themselves into the scene. The emotions are conveyed well, too. ...

This made me incredibly sad to read, which was probably the point. Okay, now for the actual feedback. (Can't copy and paste, but I will do my best to make ...

This is a really great start, but I think it can be made better just through slightly different word choice. Can't copy and paste, because iPhone, but I will do ...

This is a good concept for a poem, but it does need a little editing/revising (I can never remember which is which) when it comes to grammar. Capitalize the Y ...