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  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Fantasy Re: Reitha: Host of the Flame-chapter 0

    Well, that was different! In the good way. I'm certainly not used to... whatever it was that just happened to the girl. Color me intrigued. If I'm intrigued, then somewhere ...

    Jun 30, 2013
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: The Prophecy ch. 1-2 (edited)

    Hi Sarah! I can't stop smiling over this image in my head of a dragon and a squirrel hanging around together and being friends! It's so cute I can't take ...

    Jun 30, 2013
  • Short Story » General, Realistic Re: Footsteps in the Snow

    Lava, dearest! I don't know if I've ever reviewed for you, and the thought is purely distressing. This piqued my interest immediately, though I did have to go back to ...

    Jan 2, 2013
  • Short Story » Science Fiction, General Re: Alien [Revisited]

    Oh, my aching heart. Why do you always do this to me, Lauren? (I don't know if I've ever given you a YWS review, but in case I haven't, my ...

    Jan 2, 2013
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: Rovaalian. Chapter 1: A day of new things.

    Hi there Methrirr, My name's Rachael, but I'm more commonly known as Rach, Rache, Rache Drache, or simply Drache. I'm old bones compared to you, and have been here on ...

    Dec 24, 2012
  • Novel / Chapter » Teen Fiction, Dramatic Re: Old

    FIRST DIBS. Just how the Rache Drache likes her prey. Err, fiction. Anyway, Skinsy dearest, how I have missed your writing and your wallspam and your Paul. In particular, your ...

    Sep 26, 2012
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: Enslaved. Chapter 1 Scene 1.

    Have to mention this first, before it drives me screaming into some pit of snakes and slimy things: Arvad’s terror overcame his confusion, “Father!” He cried. After reading your post ...

    May 29, 2012
  • Short Story » Realistic, Teen Fiction Re: deleted.

    Hi, Jas dearest! Rach and Ribbit here, as requested. Neither of us can figure out how to start this review, beyond that little salutation. You asked for harsh, mean, brutal ...

    Mar 29, 2012
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Horror Re: A Monster Called Humanity: Ch 1

    Hey, Pilot! Sorry for the delay! I'll confess that the thought of biological warfare/a pandemic terrifies me more than nuclear warfare and the other common doomsday scenarios combined--so stories like

    Mar 22, 2012
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: The Fire Princess - Part One - Arinalgar - Chapter Two

    Whooooo, that was a long chapter, but I made it through! There's something compelling about this sun child deal, an inherent "evil" growing inside these girls, or a power so ...

    Mar 22, 2012
  • Short Story » Politics, Action / Adventure Re: TAKING OVER *updated*

    Hey, Logan, sorry for the delay! I get distracted too easily. Or perhaps I focus on other things too well. Regardless, I'm here now! First, I just want to say.... ...

    Mar 21, 2012
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: The Fire Princess - Part One - Arinalgar - Chapter One

    Finally here! Sorry for the delay. Got one word for you upon finishing this first third: Wowza! You've got a lot going on here in this chapter, so much my ...

    Mar 21, 2012
  • Novel / Chapter » Dramatic, Fantasy Re: untold hidden secrets

    Hi, Zohali! Here as requested. (And welcome, by the way, to YWS!) Soooooo, review time! First, a few silly things. One is to watch your punctuation and, in particular, capitalization. ...

    Mar 19, 2012
  • Short Story » Dramatic, Realistic Re: Joyce's Green (original)

    RachaelElg reviews are long, rambly, nonsensical, contradictory things--I imagine you knew this when you asked for one? Regardless, it's what you're about to get. Take from it whatever you will. ...

    Mar 19, 2012
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Romantic Re: Chapter One

    Hi ShadowPrincess! Rach here, doing the review thing, obviously. So.... the main comment I have here is "Wow, that moved fast!" There's a whole heck of a lot going on ...

    Mar 18, 2012


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